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Dealing With Grief Or A Lost Love

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BREAD

Another crumb, another day.
One more slice another year
as one by one time slips away
with loss of the ones I hold dear.

Until there's little left to chew
and few loaves left from times gone by.
Too soon the losses are nothing new
matters not the tears we cry.

Some loaves get toasted by fast living
others stay white from lives lived cold.
then some are cut too short by giving
better that than green from mold.

Today time ate one more sandwich
which has been beside me here for years.
Gone without even a twitch
a cause for more shedding of tears.

One day I'll see those other lives
and we'll discuss that baker up above.
as we reunite with friends and wives
and all those whom we dared to love.

About This Poem

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: South Carolina, United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Frost, Burns, Longfellow, Poe, and Johnson. I guess you've noticed these are all past masters. Other than folks on site I don't read any contemporary poets .

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Geezer

Geezer

3 years 5 months ago

Boy...

this one hits home! I like the images of old age and death taking their bites from our lives. One of your better ones in the realm of scancion. ~ Geez.
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scribbler

3 years 5 months ago

Hi Geez

You can be assured the scansion was almost accidental lol. As to hitting home I reckon all us old guys have similar thoughts

lovedly

lovedly

3 years 5 months ago

deleting

u know me minor points must be brushed off lol

S

scribbler

3 years 5 months ago

But

I appreciate it when other catch my mistakes

lovedly

lovedly

3 years 5 months ago

OKAY

Shall catch you
FREE EDIT EH
SMART GUY
STAN

S

scribbler

3 years 5 months ago

Hello

I am pleased you dropped by for a read