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Sep 27, 2024
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The break of dawn
As time twists
into the tenderness
of twilight
and there is no
light seeping
into the density of sight .
The sky starts
to stagger and
wake for I’ll
still be there when
the dawn
begins to break .
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Edward nigma
9 months ago
My inspiration
https://youtu.be/DapXLmHR0Tk?si=X9Pel32mRRMW0Uok
Lavender
9 months ago
The Break of Dawn
Hello, Edward,
"...I'll still be there when the dawn starts to break." Huge lump in my throat as I watch the inspiring video. Beautiful.
Thank you for this.
Lx
Rula
9 months ago
Oh my!
A very touching piece, the inspiring video was just an icing on the cake!
Thank you for sharing!
P.s. please consider me a new fan of your poetry.
Candlewitch
9 months ago
Dear Edward,
thanks for posting this! absolutely stunning! I cannot choose favorite lines as they are inseparable and I loved it all.
*hugs, Cat
captain 2
8 months 4 weeks ago
hello
great poem! Into the tenderness, of twilight. I hope it's like that. I love short poems that pack massive punch.
Best,
Captain