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May 15, 2011
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BREAK OF LINES
I broke the break
the bond
this weakness
youve flooded
me where I dwell
but I can swim
and well
and My Mermaid
guide will smile
so I set you down
with the greatest respect
you glittering phrase
your thick upset
and bravely weakly
find my strengths
in surrendering
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Esker
14 years 1 month ago
about something im working on
about something im working on
and trying to get a grip upon
(wont mention booze opps)