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Brevity and poetry.... modernisation......

another ditch
another pitch
another screaming bitch....
maybe that's what one sees
when one is in the gory of it all,
some pain
some sorrow
but clap the multitudes all
a bout perhaps of joy
and
happiness for the boxer’s collection
ends in matchlessness
that’s what all wrestling is about
another money making
stitch perhaps
after all.

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: ROU

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Roscoe Lane

Roscoe Lane

12 years 11 months ago

We all,

We all wrestle with our poetry, and our conscience. No one is matchless in poetry, there's alway another battle, even if it's only in the mind. Nice poem .Regards Roscoe.

loved

loved

12 years 11 months ago

thank you for the nicety

its such a pleasure to see .....
an encouraging remark ,
once one opens up to read
ones poetry