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a Bridge too Far

I travelled on a bridge too far
with tourists in a yellow car
above a strait beneath a cloud
as dark as an unholy shroud

our mouths filled with the ashes
of 120 children
inhaled by three breaths of savagery

our hearts hollowed out by their hands
gifting apples and wax rainbows
on reality as thin as paper

our eyes black with blood
to hide one man's guilt and
another's greed

our minds squirming with acid
while a drunkard enraptured
by burning hair and melted fingernails
jumps from chair to chair
as the blast mushrooms

...another shits himself
blissfully

another desperately masturbates
in a schoolroom
where the first bomb
emptied its bowels

and another guffaws
at the sheer depravity of it all

a House full of robots
plans a trip to Gryffindor
where the recess bell tolls forever

Really, what's wrong with you?

About This Poem

Last Few Words: ..just wondering if there should be a comma after the word drunkard. I don't think it matters technically, but perhaps readability-wise?

Review Request Direction: How was my language use?
Is the internal logic consistent?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - draft

About the Author

Country/Region: Lake Simcoe Canada

Favorite Poets: Poe, Frost, E.B. Browning, Theodor Seuss Geisel,

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Comments

Obadiah Grey

Obadiah Grey

1 week 1 day ago

"just wondering if there…

"just wondering if there should be a comma after the word drunkard."

I'm just wondering why no fuckers put a bullet in his cuntish head !

Not a nice piece. Thomas. Poignant !

Obi.