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A Broken Heart / Imagery workshop (ex. 3)

The pitiful broken stone rolled down silently,
this same, once was a real rock.
Now he'd let some hot showers free,
to tell volumes of grief untold.

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Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

Region, Country: Jordan, JOR

Favorite Poets: I favor the ones who are closer to humanity and , Poets are humanity when the world lose it.

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8 years ago

the imagery of a broken heart and the tears.
I wonder if grief might be a better word than grieves in the last line.
Jx

7 years 12 months ago

much appreciate your kind comment and the suggestion.
Thank you dear.

7 years 12 months ago

Very good but I'm a bit put off by the quotation marks

7 years 12 months ago

these were only to highlight the direct and the indirect imagery expressions.