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Sep 07, 2024
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THE BULLY
THE BULLY
Being a bully is a state of mind
Not always physical you’ll find
Nor even aggressive behaviour
I wonder, who needs a saviour
And who’s the real victim here
Bullies are bullied it may appear
Yet is this all psychological fluff
Those affected have had enough
Not long before one might snap
And react with more than a slap
To pursue a permanent solution
Finally ending all the persecution
About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Not actively editing
Comments
Rula
9 months 3 weeks ago
Hello Twizzle
This entry really drew my attention. I like your take of the contest and can't agree more with you
These lines are definitely special and sum it all
I wonder, who needs a saviour
And who’s the real victim here
Bullies are bullied it may appear
Best wishes and thank you for sharing.
Tawny023
9 months 2 weeks ago
Hard hitting
This poem definitely packed a punch and the lines Not long before one might snap
And react with more than a slap
We’re both clever and hard hitting.
Great entry and I look forward to reading more.