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May 05, 2012
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C R A C K E R .. J A C K E D
hump the kisses
the cream you butter
from rancid dreams
and that snarl pulled
like Lucifers loose button
at your crotch
steamy metaphors shoving
limbed wheeled tracks
all those whom became
ghosts
swallow your fucking pride you
pointing the automatic
against my temple
how I worshipped
the cracker jack treat
the brokeness under the
heel of night
stitchs are for bitchs
thirty sics across your
face
turned away at the right
time
the night time crime
like a wave
little black gloves and spells
said you liked the feel of
warm shells
and how the darkness glides
and slides
like a knife
sharpened with stars
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Ester
13 years 2 months ago
slides like a knife sharpened with stars...
This is for me poetry of a high class, it is a pleasure to read.
Writing as you do requires intelligence and a deep sensitivity.
Very beautiful.
ThankYou.
E
Esker
12 years 9 months ago
Hey E
Me again
I think you are Intelligence and Have sensitivities
that line is mysticism
but many swords and knives of long ago were forged
from stars that fell from the lair of the "Gods"
Joan of Arcs Sword was said to have been given to her by God
I really like Joan of Arc
and It can be said she did not cry out
when the English murdered her
In the lands around Damascus there are areas where the
"stars" fell or where traded with the people of the deserts
Thank You
Mr Wolf
Esker
13 years 2 months ago
the land of once and there is...
the underlying of it is
ability to see
to touch
the feelings that starve so much
the writers I read were greatly gifted
and sensitive there were all
battles and the long haul of life
the ghosts they avoided
dealt with and become
of course not all
a lot of these experiences are fictions
like the above culled from movie works
books and people telling me their life
experiences
but not everyone hears the same story
sees the same imagery or thinks the
framework to poetry alike
This world is Beautiful and Ugly
and something that exists in between
Thank You Ester!
Esker!