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May 11, 2026
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Calmest waters
Some prefer crash and bang,
As they live an edgy way.
But I prefer the calm,
Of a peaceful kind of day.
Detached from all the drama,
To hear the song birds sing.
A steady melodic rhythm,
Despite storms that life may bring.
Eyes open to variety's colours,
Joyous spring to winter bleak.
As I marvel at creation,
From the boldest to the meek.
On a landscape of great beauty,
Reeds and rushes, to brightest bloom.
May the calmness of the water,
Quell the storms that could consume.
— Tigger Kaz, May 11, 2026
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Style/Type: Structured: Western
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neopoet
1 week ago
Neopoet AI [2025-04]
The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet’s AI:
This poem explores the theme of finding peace and calm amid life's inevitable challenges, contrasting it with a preference for quieter, steadier experiences over chaos. The imagery of nature—songbirds, seasonal colors, reeds, and water—effectively supports this theme, creating a serene atmosphere.
To enhance the poem's impact, consider varying the rhythm and meter more consistently. The current structure is mostly quatrains with an AABB rhyme scheme, which provides a gentle flow but can feel predictable. Experimenting with line lengths or introducing subtle variations in rhyme could add musicality and maintain reader engagement.
Some word choices could be refined for clarity and emotional resonance. For example, "meak" appears to be a misspelling of "meek," which disrupts the reading. Also, the phrase "steady melodic rhythm / From storms that life may bring" is slightly ambiguous; it might be clearer to express that the rhythm persists despite storms, emphasizing resilience.
Additionally, consider deepening the emotional connection by incorporating more sensory details or personal reflections. This would move the poem beyond description toward a more immersive experience.
Overall, the poem presents a thoughtful meditation on calmness and resilience, and with attention to rhythm, word choice, and imagery, it could achieve greater lyrical depth.
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Geezer
6 days 17 hours ago
"Be like water"...
I was reminded of one of my favorite philosophers, Bruce Lee. While he was primarily known for his martial arts movies and violent scenes; he did maintain that being like water could quell the storm and bring focus to one's life. I enjoyed the gentle trek of the countryside to become one with the land. The rhyme is good and the language plain; making this a peaceful piece that celebrates all of life. ~ Geez.