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A Candle in the Night

Just as it's lazy demeanor does imply
the trees seem to have been coerced,
by a breeze so nonchalant-like
that it really seems rehearsed.

Yet, in the end it's justified
as the landscape clearly shows,
the leaves have all but vanished
for Winters' breath so fiercly blows!

But, just as every fallen leaf
becomes a resident on the ground,
we all would adapt to the situation
so, food and shelter must be found;

and, through the very coldest times
of Winters' deepest, lonely chill,
the trust, and comfort of companionship
will dissipate the colds' strong will!

About This Poem

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Direction: How does this theme appeal to you?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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raj

14 years 2 months ago

a great message in this

a great message in this write about dealing with situations in life...with a lovely ending i liked the most

the trust, and comfort of companionship
will dissipate the colds' strong will!

docmaverick

docmaverick

14 years 2 months ago

Thanx, raj....

...greatly appreciated your taking the time to comment. Sometimes, I end up writing a piece just for me...and don't really expect a comment. So, I was more than pleasantly surprised to see yours.
thanx, again...and, happy keester bunny day!
doc.