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Nov 02, 2022
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CANDLES GLORY
Leave Not
till the candle light continues
keep composing poems
till goes off the candle
even in darkness
I compose
FREE VERSE
so far all loved
my verse
gave me points
to hold contests
am I not a
poeyet?
I ask you all
About This Poem
Last Few Words: WHY LIGHT CANDLES
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Geezer
2 years 8 months ago
Indeed...
you are a poeyet. How could anyone doubt it? ~ Geez.
.
lovedly
2 years 8 months ago
thanks Gee
rgds....
your second sentence not understood..Gee
Rula
2 years 8 months ago
Lovedly
You are a distinguished one, in a positive way.
You read all and all reads you
Even if they don't leave a word for you
Or two
Keep the candle's light on
Write on
You're the best.
Be yourself
Be you
lovedly
2 years 8 months ago
Rula You raise my morale
like a bird with wings hurt tries to fly again
I had released my caged parrot ...later I realized it couldn't ....but that one time it flew towards the black cloud
and dropped ...thank god not dead
We couldn't trace it then
but after a few days it returned
strangely picked a nut from my extended palm and flew
never came again
how I wish I
am like that lovely parrot too
when I go
I shall also be GONE....
just remember me will you....
all NEO
Rosewood Apothecary
2 years 8 months ago
I love a good candle metaphor
I love that theme. How many timeless stanzas can be written under the light of one slowly burning candle?
Tim
Lavender
2 years 8 months ago
Candles Glory
Hello, Lovedly,
You are both the light and the reflection of light. Beautiful poetry from a wise poeyet.
L
lovedly
2 years 8 months ago
THANKS MY LOVED READERS FOR NIAGARA FALL LIKE COMMENTS
You are both the light and the reflection of light. Beautiful poetry from a wise poeyet.
You are a distinguished one, in a positive way.
You read all and all reads you
Even if they don't leave a word for you
Or two
Keep the candle's light on
Write on
You're the best.
Be yourself
Be you
I love that theme. How many timeless stanzas can be written under the light of one slowly burning candle?