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lou

Oct 19, 2011 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

For Cat

Abundant grace
Transfused with love and kindness
You offer to all

Hold high the weapon of right
Smite what is wrong.
A tender shield held in defence against hate

Stand in defiance
Kick malevolence
into oblivion

Talent and artistry
Remain

About This Poem

Last Few Words: The Doom sisters rock !!!! Love you lou

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: West London, GBR

Favorite Poets: Pablo Neruda , Jack Kerouac, Alan Ginsberg, D.H Lawrence, Jim Morrison's lyrics,

Comments

weirdelf

13 years 9 months ago

Bravo!

Stated with elegance, love and eloquence, Lou.

lou

13 years 9 months ago

Jess

Thank you,

I can't stand to think that Cat has been victimised in this way.

Lou

magics02

13 years 9 months ago

Great job Lou

Spot on here with this one

Hold high the weapon of right
Smite what is wrong.
A tender shield held in defence against hate

lou

13 years 9 months ago

Mona

Thank you.

lou

t. reflexion

13 years 9 months ago

HI

thank you i'm pleased that you liked it.

Lou

lou

13 years 9 months ago

Jayne

thank you, i wish we could stop who ever it is who has attacked Cat, i hate the fact that she has been driven away.

love lou

Hooded Stranger

13 years 9 months ago

Lou

Lou,

Spot on. Perfect!

lou

13 years 9 months ago

Dan

thanks i'm glad you like it

cheers

lou

Kailashana2

13 years 9 months ago

I can only see the good that has come from this madness. I know that when the hurt hurts it hurts like hell and it feels as though it will never pass, but with all the folks who have cared enough to comment, friends and friends' poems such as this eloquent and elegant poem Lou wrote for you, it's proof positive that unkindness and desperate lies to gain a foothold will never ever *win*, not for long anyway except for the shock of it happening..

Love will triumph!

lou

13 years 9 months ago

Anna

very true.

thank you

lou

13 years 9 months ago

Xena

thank you,

I think it's a shame what's happening.

Lou

Candlewitch

13 years 8 months ago

Dear (((Lou)))

I came here it catch up on your writing to see and comment on all I have missed. And I find this gem of love and understanding! What a pleasant and wonderful surprise!!! Thank you!!!

All I can say, in my defence for not getting here sooner, is; I have been busy with getting the Book of Styx and Book of Styx II ready for publication. And of course AEC business. So forgive me for not being here sooner, please? I love and appreciate every word that you have so carefully and lovingly crafted. Big (((Hugs)))

Love, Cat