A Cat's Whiskers (Haiku)

arabesques of light
spouted through perforations
quiver quietly

About This Poem

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: IND

Favorite Poets: Apart from Walt Whitman, the poet, there are a range of painters who have made a great impact on my work and life. Painters such as Henri Matisse, Pablo Picasso, Mark Rothko, Vincent Van Gogh and a host of others.

Comments

Leonard

14 years ago

A huge compliment

Thanks Lonnie

Leonard

scribbler

14 years ago

hello

always like a visual Haiku like this one..............stan

Leonard

14 years ago

Thanks Stan

Glad you like it.

Leonard

Barbara Writes

14 years ago

nice haiku

Arabesques is the only word I haven't found in my laptop dictionary. can you tell me what it means?
other wise nice visual like Scrib says

Leonard

14 years ago

Thank you Barbara

The meaning of "arabesque" according to the Oxford Concise Dictionary: An ornamental design consisting of intertwined flowing lines.

Best wishes ... Leonard

weirdelf

14 years ago

works well

a suggestion for the last line-
quiver in fey dust motes

Leonard

14 years ago

Thanks Jess

Leonard