A Cat's Whiskers (Haiku)

arabesques of light
spouted through perforations
quiver quietly

About This Poem

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: IND

Favorite Poets: Apart from Walt Whitman, the poet, there are a range of painters who have made a great impact on my work and life. Painters such as Henri Matisse, Pablo Picasso, Mark Rothko, Vincent Van Gogh and a host of others.

Comments

Leonard

14 years 3 months ago

A huge compliment

Thanks Lonnie

Leonard

scribbler

14 years 3 months ago

hello

always like a visual Haiku like this one..............stan

Leonard

14 years 3 months ago

Thanks Stan

Glad you like it.

Leonard

Barbara Writes

14 years 3 months ago

nice haiku

Arabesques is the only word I haven't found in my laptop dictionary. can you tell me what it means?
other wise nice visual like Scrib says

Leonard

14 years 3 months ago

Thank you Barbara

The meaning of "arabesque" according to the Oxford Concise Dictionary: An ornamental design consisting of intertwined flowing lines.

Best wishes ... Leonard

weirdelf

14 years 3 months ago

works well

a suggestion for the last line-
quiver in fey dust motes

Leonard

14 years 3 months ago

Thanks Jess

Leonard