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Jul 20, 2017
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Censor Sensor:
Freedom to express
Poetry has become less
Arbitrariness
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Utilizing the spectre of extremism, extreme efforts are being employed to eradicate the public right to free expression. Whistle blowers are being targeted and their right to inform, expose and educate the public on official corruption, chicanery and criminal conspiracy is curtailed. Those states that constantly broadcast their democratic foundations have been among the first to adopt the politically correct propaganda of New-speak.
Style/Type: Structured: Eastern
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
Pugilist
7 years 11 months ago
No Request for Critique
Without a request for critique, this is the limit of my commentary.
OriginalRhyku
7 years 11 months ago
Mr. Moore
Please Sir, may I have some more?
Pugilist
7 years 11 months ago
List the poem as requesting Raw feedback
I only critique poetry were the owner is serious about thirty work.
OriginalRhyku
7 years 11 months ago
Mr. Moore,
I am the originator of a new style of Poetry (Rhyku - Haiku of three rhyming lines with a contextual Title line). You do not know me so I would appreciate it if you do not arbitrarily ascribe your limited understanding to other people's intentions and motivations.
If you do not like or appreciate the Rhykus, you have your right to your views but please refrain from casting aspersions on the poet.
Pugilist
7 years 11 months ago
Dude,
If all you want is to be told you are pretty, just say so. This passive aggressive whining is rather sad.