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Changing Times
Changing Times
Suitable placards are not to be found
carried by those who protest
Hippie and Flower Child far underground
no longer aiding the quest
militant factions now cry their demands
while terrorists lurk in the wings
neither are certain who really commands
but both have formidable stings
gone are the days of the sit-ins for peace
gone are the love-ins for change
now there is hatred that screams for release
from politics furtive and strange
AK’s and Glocks are the tools of the day
wielded by bullies and fools
strumming guitars is no longer the way
to go about changing the rules
the method is madness, the outcome insane,
participants dying by choice
innocent bystanders harvest the pain
politicos snidely rejoice
we’ve met with our enemy and it is us
it seems we’ve learned nothing at all
from days when minorities conquered the bus
til now, when our empires fall
C. Lon R. Bruso
About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Direction:
How was my language use?
How does this theme appeal to you?
Is the internal logic consistent?
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Not actively editing
Comments
Sparrow
10 years 6 months ago
Lonnie
A grand write, I do so miss the love ins, and the communes, though only the former was attended in my own bedroom, with my then wife lol
Take care young traveller, know we think of you both out there.
Yours Ian & the Children
Lonnie
10 years 6 months ago
Thanks Ian,
Always good to hear from my friends across the pond!
scribbler
10 years 6 months ago
Hi Lonnie
The times have indeed changed. Too many fought against the establishment then became anxious to Become the establishment. And right and wrong has devolved into situational ethics. Thoughtful poem.....stan
Lonnie
10 years 6 months ago
Thanks Stan,
Many things change with time, but again, many things don't, and that may be even more scary!
emogothgirl
10 years 6 months ago
lonnie
this one really made me think. first of all, the pattern is tight. and secondly the content brings up a really good point: are we really going about protest the right way? it seems the difference is that now there are few who would wield the weapons in the midst of those who sit in peace. I like to believe the majority only wants peaceful change. thank you for this, it really made me wonder.
mag
Lonnie
10 years 6 months ago
Thank you Mag,
The days of the Bob Dylan type protest songs are indeed long gone. I miss those days, ( sigh )! But, what the Hell, we have to evolve somehow I suppose, I just wish we'd learn how to deal with our problems a little better! LOL!! Thanks for the feedback!
Roscoe Lane
10 years 6 months ago
Excellent poetry,
Excellent poetry and strong message. Regards Roscoe....
Lonnie
10 years 6 months ago
Thanks Roscoe,
Glad you enjoyed this one, and I thank you once again for the feedback!
mand
10 years 6 months ago
Hi Lonnie
Spot on I'd say! :)
Another great poem worthy of a book!
LOve Mand xxx
Lonnie
10 years 6 months ago
Thank you Mand,
Your input is always welcome and respected! I appreciate your time and effort!
Geremia
10 years 6 months ago
Time changes from minute to
Time changes from minute to minute, The world is spinning too fast. This is a wonderful write, Lonnie.
Joe
Lonnie
10 years 6 months ago
Thanks Joe,
Glad you liked my meager offering! Hope you are feeling okay!
wesley snow
10 years 6 months ago
Always a pleasure Lonnie.
Always a pleasure.