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Dec 04, 2024
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CHAOS OF EMOTIONS
I see it now, adrift in my loneliness my anchor no more.
It's always been there, I fear, this sea of humanity without a port of sort.
Lost souls, filled with emotions in hollow hulls, their cargo precious with fear.
The chaos revealed, as some steal moments of themselves, unaware that their fear is just an oasis of their minds.
I'm
part of them now, this unknowing, this searching this me.
I guess we all meet on the road called humanity, let's just help each other along the way.
Que
About This Poem
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Leslie
6 months 3 weeks ago
Que
I think I get it, emotions are simply chaos. Fear drives us through day and night. I loved all of it especially the last line!