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Dec 05, 2010
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Charades
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The masks we wear, to us are given,
assigned to us before our cue.
The choice is ours to reveal or hide-
A grand charade with many a clue.
Would you be this or be you that;
Is it surfaced or is it hidden?
Not all secrets are lies or deceit,
Our view of others we must widen.
The genuine heart will itself reveal
Its spots or stripes are where they're at.
The lot of what we think we see,
provide but circumstantial caveat.
We often discard what eyes can't see;
Too often distrust what hearts conceal.
The masquerade of life continues,
Its colours and shapes our truths congeal.
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About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Frederick Kesner
14 years 7 months ago
Hi RM-X
Thank you for your comment and support. Regards, CB
mand
14 years 7 months ago
Hello CB
Very philosophical, well thought out and cleverly written.
Good rhyme and meter.
I enjoyed reading this thought provoking poem.
Love Mand xxxxxxxxx
Frederick Kesner
14 years 7 months ago
Thanks Mand
You are much appreciated for your kind words of comment. Cheers, CB