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February 2023 Challenge Chariot To Hell

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Chariot To Hell

Black body
Laced in golden flames
Nevermind the horses
A hemi will do just fine

She revved the engine
And started her descent
A steel powerhouse bouncing
Against nitrous embers

Satan heard her coming
And shook his head
He was in for it now
His wife was amongst the dead

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Country/Region: United States

Favorite Poets: Edgar Allan Poe, Jim Morrison

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RoseBlack

RoseBlack

2 years 4 months ago

Thank you

For catching the spelling error...much appreciated...glad you enjoyed

RoseBlack

RoseBlack

2 years 4 months ago

Unintentional

But must be why it resonated with me...plus I prefer hemi to horses...