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Feb 10, 2023
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Chariot To Hell
Black body
Laced in golden flames
Nevermind the horses
A hemi will do just fine
She revved the engine
And started her descent
A steel powerhouse bouncing
Against nitrous embers
Satan heard her coming
And shook his head
He was in for it now
His wife was amongst the dead
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
RoseBlack
2 years 4 months ago
Thank you
For catching the spelling error...much appreciated...glad you enjoyed
Rosewood Apothecary
2 years 4 months ago
Ok so I’m not sure if you did this deliberately
So yeah the Hemi. Hemispheric pistons are the hallmark of Dodge, Plymouth and Chrysler. Who’s logo is what?? A ram!! The Horned god, Baphomet to me. Satan to non pagan infidels. That’s deep symbolism.!.!
Tim
RoseBlack
2 years 4 months ago
Unintentional
But must be why it resonated with me...plus I prefer hemi to horses...