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A Childhood with Better Lighting
Rewriting Memories
Never mind the bombs or images of war
Or the blind kid on the bus singing trying to make a living
How did we neglect the hungry and the destitute and the old?
But time does not forget
It just plays in a private theater
Like a matinee waiting for me to come in and watch
Amidst all that chaos and madness
There was a beautiful, picturesque sense to it all
In the open road
Or plazas people went about their way
Beyond color and smell
More than taste and touch
Like music
Some of those brighter recollections overshadow the sad
But I never forgot about that boy
Clothes torn
Hanging on singing with a gifted voice until the next bus stop
Collecting whatever he could
My grandmother giving me a few coins to place in his hand
A life lesson in understanding - how good we had it
Maybe he grew up to be man
And found a way to make a living
And found someone to love him
And had children of his own
But in rewriting this memory
I wish I could have given more
About This Poem
Last Few Words: NaPoWriMo2026 Day 3
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Direction: Is the internal logic consistent?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
Lavender
2 weeks 6 days ago
A Childhood With Better Lighting
Hello, Wally,
So relatable. A significant memory, and such a valuable lesson and awakening.
Thank you,
L
|Eliza
2 weeks 6 days ago
Such a great title!
You really hit the mark here and made me want to read your poem. You write with sophistication and leave me really wanting to know what happened to the boy.
Well done on a great poem!
Eliza
Geezer
2 weeks 5 days ago
Wow...
this is amongst your best Wally. I wanted to read your story, and when I had; I too, wanted to know what happened to that boy! I felt the flow of life around you, and the image of that boy, is now in my head. Well-done! ~ Geez.
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Candlewitch
1 day 17 hours ago
Dear Wally,
this is a very tender write. I admire your sensitivity. Great job all 'round!
fondly, Cat