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Nov 24, 2021
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Christmas -ish. Haiku -ish.
A coddling of eggs,
emptying of Santas sack,
an old bird well stuffed.
Obi.
About This Poem
Last Few Words: take care now I'm sensitive ! ish.
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Geezer
3 years 7 months ago
About as...
sensitive as the warts on Old Scrooge's ass! I see an elderly couple, having a break, after all their hard work! LoL
Geez.
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Obadiah Grey
3 years 7 months ago
I can see I'm gonna have to
I can see I'm gonna have to school you on the use of proper "Englund" ish, Gee.
An "ASS", is a beast of burden one would laden and depend on to deliver ones possessions to, wherever !
Whereas, an "ARSE", is more functional and relieves said burden from whomever.
Winky eye,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, Obi.
Geezer
3 years 7 months ago
Excuse me...
I meant arse! Still good work!
lovedly
3 years 7 months ago
nice
obyish