Cleanup on the isle of political debris

The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

This poem effectively uses imagery and emotive language to convey a sense of disillusionment and uncertainty. The use of phrases like "distortion, distraction, diversion and subterfuge" and "crazy, wild, bizarre, unprecedented" create a vivid picture of chaos and confusion.

However, the poem could benefit from more concrete imagery and specific references. While the general sense of political disillusionment is clear, the poem could be more impactful if it included specific examples or anecdotes that illustrate this theme.

The rhythm and flow of the poem could also be improved. Some lines are significantly longer than others, which disrupts the rhythm and can make the poem difficult to read. Consider revising the poem to create a more consistent rhythm.

The ending of the poem, "Just wait for the cleanup crew", is somewhat abrupt. It might be more effective to build up to this conclusion more gradually, perhaps by introducing the idea of a "cleanup crew" earlier in the poem and then expanding on this concept in the final lines.

Lastly, the poem could benefit from a more consistent use of poetic devices such as rhyme and meter. While not every poem needs to rhyme or follow a strict meter, these devices can help to create a more engaging and memorable reading experience.

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Yes, it's sad to think that this is the best we can do.I wouldn't agree with the 3rd stanza, though, we surely have a pretty good idea what comes next and the territory is hardly uncharted. Felt like you were struggling to find a satisfactory end to the poem. Maybe there ain't one!

with Ray, I think that we don't know what is next. We had hope, but that is fading fast in light of the crazy narratives out there.
I think I get where you were going with the last stanza. We are hoping that things don't get as bad as we fear they might, and we just have to wait for the next election to get someone better, someone who isn't mentally drained or crazy. ~ Geezer.
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I agree with your feelings. Our country is undergoing a terrific change. We impeached a NY senator because his actions were not acceptable for a Senator yet we elected a conviced felon as President! Amazing!