A Clerihew

The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

This poem adheres to the structure of a Clerihew, a whimsical, four-line biographical poem invented by Edmund Clerihew Bentley. The first line typically ends with a person's name, and the rhyme scheme follows AABB, both of which are present in this poem.

However, the rhythm could be improved. A Clerihew often has an irregular meter, which adds to its charm, but the rhythm here feels slightly off. The second line, "Never sat on a bench," has one syllable more than the first line, which disrupts the flow. Consider revising this line to maintain a more consistent rhythm.

The content of the poem is humorous and light, fitting the tone of a Clerihew. However, it could benefit from more specific or surprising details to make the humor more striking. For example, instead of "She said bed was just fine," consider a more unexpected or quirky detail about Dame Judi Dench's process of learning lines.

Lastly, the poem could benefit from a more engaging title. The current title, "A Clerihew," is accurate but lacks intrigue. Consider a title that hints at the poem's content or the personality of Dame Judi Dench.

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interesting form, where did you find it? good subject matter.

*hugs, Cat

I miss seeing her in movies and on TV. Quite the character actress. I also was surprised at the form that I didn't know was a thing. ~ LoL ~ Geez.
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