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May 11, 2022
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CLIMBING TO THE HEAVENS
The affable night gave me the secret of how to come to heaven safely,
and the bold clouds laid out his support that I should climb bravely,
the moon was so proud that I was anticipating to come to his sight,
but coming up so far I was terrified by a gigantic moon light,
and a dark cloud was clustering trying to play a role of a good Samaritan,
but the embargo of fear of silence gripped the atmosphere yet I'm the titan,
who intends to visit the kingdom of God and His angels.
©® Onyinyechi Cosmos Etu
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Candlewitch
3 years 2 months ago
dear Onyinyechi,
change your title to: Climbing To The Heavens.
The affable night gave me (the)secret (of) how to come to heaven safely
may you someday, attain your aspired goal...but not too soon...we need you here on planet Earth! if anyone can do it, it is you!
*hugs, Cat
Jackweb
3 years 2 months ago
Thank you Cat...
for being the eagle eye. Line corrected!