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Close To Me
When I awake from my dreams
on each new day morn
I turn and find you near to me
your body soft and warm.
I take you in my loving arms
and hold you close to me
for I can only face the day
knowing your love for me.
As I go about my days
life’s pressures all around
my thoughts drift back to you
and the love that we have found
I think of when you’re close to me
and all those things you do
till I just want the time to come
when I’m back home with you.
When the day is over
and I’m lying there with you
I take you in my arms again
feeling love for you
our hearts, entwined as one
two lovers in the night
and I will hold you close to me
until the morning light.
About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Timbo
14 years 5 months ago
many thanks Ian Tim
many thanks Ian
Tim
Barbara Writes
14 years 5 months ago
Beautiful
Beautiful beautiful just beautiful
Timbo
14 years 5 months ago
It was very kind of you to
It was very kind of you to comment Barbara, I'm very flattered.
thank you,
Tim
lou
14 years 5 months ago
Tim
That's what i call romance, we all wish to be loved like that.
lou
Timbo
14 years 5 months ago
thanks for commenting Lou.
thanks for commenting Lou.
Tim
Ayaz Warith
14 years 4 months ago
Dear Timbo, this is really a
Dear Timbo, this is really a dream. Great.
Regards
Ayaz
Timbo
14 years 4 months ago
Thank you Ayaz. Tim
Thank you Ayaz.
Tim