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S
scribbler
Jun 11, 2021 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)
This poem is part of the contest:

Season Of Spring Contest!

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CLOUD WATCHERS

Blue eyes blink open
across tattering gray sky
to watch storm depart

About This Poem

Style/Type: Structured: Eastern

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: South Carolina, United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Frost, Burns, Longfellow, Poe, and Johnson. I guess you've noticed these are all past masters. Other than folks on site I don't read any contemporary poets .

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S

scribbler

4 years ago

Hi Mark

Try reading just the first and third lines then tell me if it should be watching or watch. I appreciate the thought you put into this form which I only scribble out once in a while

S

scribbler

4 years ago

Hey

Enjoyable is what I aim for. So I reckon I did well. Winning a contest is secondary to sharing to me

Geezer

Geezer

4 years ago

I see...

Lying in a hammock, staring at the sky, making rabbits out of clouds! ~ Geez.
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S

scribbler

4 years ago

Yep

Watching the sky open back up as the storm clouds leave. BTW I was on the front porch yesterday talking to my nearest neighbor and we almost got run over by a deer lol