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Aug 27, 2021
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Clown
I feel like I'm breaking, with every step I'm taking.
Falling apart, just like my heart.
You had my hand, now you don't understand.
I needed you, for what I'm going through
You shut me down, act like I'm the clown?
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c lynn brooks
4 years 1 month ago
Her heart
A warm Neo welcome to you. To give it more depth, the end of each linesw does not have to rhyme.