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May 11, 2016
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Cognitive Dissonance
for many,
not just some
being good
is being dumb.
— weirdelf, May 11, 2016
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Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Rough draft
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Geezer
10 years 1 month ago
Sounds like...
a quote, more than a poem, but I like it!
Makes one think about if you meant that one should keep their mouths shut or maybe if being ignorant in some cases is bliss? ~ Gee
weirdelf
10 years 1 month ago
I guess it's more an aphorism
than a poem.
I love aphorisms despite, or perhaps because of, their lack of control.
This one really means to say "I fucking hate the dumbing down and anti-intellectualism that conservatism and other forms of totalitarianism always does. Like Trump and Dubya."
brittle light
10 years 1 month ago
there are a few ways to "get"
there are a few ways to "get" this
that's cool
I am wondering if you had a single definitive meaning when it was conceived, or was it constructed in such a way to be enigmatic.
just curious.
It's so smooth and sonorous, YET, its dissonancing my brain!
weirdelf
10 years 1 month ago
cool
see my response to Geezer's comment.
Esker
10 years 1 month ago
the Dumb down persona....
Don't let the bastards think U are bright........what an error that was for me
Great Poem! enjoy the writing from u Elf!
weirdelf
10 years 1 month ago
ta mate
from you that counts.
Keith Logan
10 years 1 month ago
Reminds me
of a bit of bastardised Latin we used at my first place of work
nil permitus illigitimus carborundum
don't let the bastards grind you down
weirdelf
10 years 1 month ago
oh yeah|!
I have used that.
Rula
10 years 1 month ago
enjoyed this read.
enjoyed this read.
weirdelf
10 years 1 month ago
good
good
weirdelf
10 years 1 month ago
There are many things that upset and disturb me in this world
dumbing down is high on the list.
Thank goodness I live on a beautiful harbour in a pretty cool country.
Life doesn't suck.
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