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Mar 26, 2016
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Color of a Poem
A creative thought
crimson, blue, dark or white in
ethereal shades
About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Eastern
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Seren
9 years 3 months ago
What a beautiful poem I can
What a beautiful poem I can offer nothing but praise
Wow !! And a sigh.
Love and big hugs Jayne xxx
raj
9 years 3 months ago
Hi Jayne
Good to see you. Thank you for the time and your appreciative comment. Means a lot..
Much love and warm hugs...stay well...
Seren
9 years 3 months ago
I decided to read this again
I decided to read this again before bed .. on ripples of thought I wish you goodnight. Shhh its actuall 4am the sun will be up in about and hour and forty lol better get a little rest
This is a very good poem my friend
Love always Jayne x
alidzain
9 years 3 months ago
Raj
I agree with Jayne. Kudos.
Alid
raj
9 years 3 months ago
Thanks Alid for you time..
Thanks Alid for you time...read and comment
Regards,
Roscoe Lane
9 years 3 months ago
Simple,
Simple and perfectly done. Regards Roscoe...
raj
9 years 3 months ago
Thanks Roscoe for your time,
Thanks Roscoe for your time, read and comment. Appreciated.
Regards,
raj
9 years 3 months ago
Thanks Roscoe for your time,
Thanks Roscoe for your time, read and comment. Appreciated.
Regards,
Rula
9 years 3 months ago
perfecto!
I like it
raj
9 years 3 months ago
Thanks a lot Rula for your
Thanks a lot Rula for your comment. Good to know you liked it.
Regards,
raj
7 years 5 months ago
Thanks a lot Molly for your
Thanks a lot Molly for your words of appreciation which will encourage me to write more...
Regards...
scribbler
7 years 5 months ago
Hi Raj!
The color of thoughts is something I'd never considered. I wonder what color a lazy summer thought is? lol......stan
raj
7 years 5 months ago
Hi Stan
you got mr thinking for sure :)
Regards..
lovedly
7 years 5 months ago
I agree with stan
thoughts have
vibrations and impressions
eyes see colours..
and
raj
raj
7 years 5 months ago
Don't know what you mean by
Don't know what you mean by me dissociating...
Regards...
lovedly
7 years 5 months ago
sorry my error ...I have removed it
well thought is much better