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Mar 24, 2014
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COLOUR
In Truth,
the only colour that matters
is not worn by the skin
but the one defining the heart
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
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Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Ian.T
11 years 3 months ago
Alid
That this is written shows a thought that to me is a worry.
We should feel colour no matter what, and then really see with that sense.
There sitting in the centre of any colour is a feeling, it is the feeling that matters.
To expand, for poetry, touch the inside of a rose, there is an energy that prevails and is as powerful as a bursting star, this is a true look at colour.
That man in his stupidity has made it a point of focus, where all they see is the outside, is beyond my ways.
Take care out there, and take a look inside at the spirit of all you meet,
Yours Ian.T