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Come Away With Me

Come talk with me
we might have common oddities,

we could atleast see where it goes
no one knows, until they try things on for size;

come play this bantering game with me
you must know I kinda like you,

I've been exploring with my eyes
I hope you didn't reognize, I tried to be subtle;

come stay awhile
and we'll see what happens with our thoughts

'cause I've been wondering 'bout yours, of late
we could share a game of chemisry;

come be alone with me
we'll be surrounded by our pasts,

it shouldn't last if we share imaginations
you feel like exploring?

Come away wih me
even if it's only for a bit of time,

we deserve to know how high we'd fly
and I'd really like to fly away, with you.

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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docmaverick

docmaverick

13 years 11 months ago

Thanx soo much, Seren....

...I haven't been able to get on line at home, for about 7 weeks straight; so for now.....I'm at one of my "happy places". PLEASE, don't tell others of the address. It's basically a "time-share".
I do love your life,
docmaverick.