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Dec 17, 2013
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Come closer to me
You come closer to my lips
then you place your lips upon my ears
why do you love to tease
do come and kiss me
let us come closer to each one
remove our clothes for fun
then I will rest upon you
and then do whatever you want to do
okay, okay, okay
the drums beat to our tunes
sweetly we are absorbed in between
come closer to me
love me
love me
love now
you can't stay away from me
come closer darling
come closer to me
now, now, now
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
mand
11 years 6 months ago
Hi Loved!
Phew! Hot stuff! Vibrant with passion and longing.
Now where's Russell! Lol
Love Mand xxxxxxx
Ian.T
11 years 6 months ago
Hey!
Off to the cold shower with you lol???
loved
11 years 6 months ago
it's snowing
have a hot bath
stay indoors
then Rfol
loved
11 years 6 months ago
who ever russel may be
he must still be rustling
lol hahahaha
thanks Mand