Come Find The Mirth

The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

The poem "Come Find The Mirth" demonstrates a good understanding of rhythm and rhyme, which contributes to the overall flow and readability of the piece. The repeated line "Come find the mirth" effectively serves as a refrain, adding a sense of cohesion and unity to the poem.

However, there are a few areas that could benefit from further refinement. The poem could explore its themes more deeply. While the poem does a good job of describing the changing seasons and the activities of the townspeople, it doesn't delve into the significance of these events. What does the coming of autumn and the subsequent arrival of spring mean to the speaker or to the townspeople? How does this cycle of change affect them emotionally or spiritually?

Additionally, the poem could benefit from more varied and complex language. While the language used is clear and straightforward, incorporating more figurative language, such as metaphors and similes, could add depth and richness to the poem.

Lastly, the poem could work on maintaining consistent tense. The line "They've done the shovelling all around" seems to be in past tense, while the rest of the poem is in present tense. This inconsistency can be confusing for readers and disrupt the flow of the poem.

Overall, the poem shows promise and with a few revisions could be even more engaging and impactful.

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I love that you end every verse with the same line, of (Come find the mirth)! your poem is inspirational. I like its up-beat tone. good luck on the contest!

*hugs, Cat

Hello, Rula,
Such a merry feeling here! I really enjoy the image of Mrs. Stewart and Mrs. Flynn raking the leaves, and the changing of the seasons is delightful. Mirth, indeed!
Thank you!
Lx