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Completely original

I grasp my cow, it's tiny scow
so when we think, despite the sink
you grow your toes, in desperate throes
and try to make a disk of it

If when we turn, without a burn
and tackle every scullery
we skip on vile skullduggery
and that's a daisy's mis-turn

I grab your foot, without a thought
and try to make it relevant
so give up verse, and then traverse
Some broken glass,
and raise an undead revenant

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Sydney, Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: The Romantics, The Mersey Sound, The Beats and, of course, The Bard

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Candlewitch

Candlewitch

13 years 7 months ago

Hi Jess,

I did enjoy your pure nonsense poem, and found it humerous! Thanks for the smiles.

always, Cat

weirdelf

weirdelf

10 years 6 months ago

ta, Cat and Esker

I was inspired by Stephen Fry's doco "World of Words" wherein he demonstrates that it is possible to write passages of completely correct English that have almost certainly never ever been written or uttered before.

L

Lonnie

10 years 6 months ago

Hey Jess

Not my cup of napalm, but I would be slated to be castrated, doused in honey, and placed naked over a hill of fire ants if I did not acknowledge the talent here! Very original indeed!