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samary

Nov 23, 2019 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Compulsion Petrarchan Sonnet. November Competition

I am the sensation of the century
All obsolete ideas have taken flight
I will save you, free you, no need to fight
Vote for me I have charisma, pedigree
This one system will stop all treachery
There is no harm within the flashing light
Listen hard, as what I say is right
Emotions ,are just virtual memory

Subliminal words always find a home
I use all means to make you understand
All opposition will have to atone
I feel no human, now can stay my hand
I have superior strength, you understand
Vote for me, I have the choicest brand
Samantha Beardon.

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

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Region, Country: Uk, GBR

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5 years 7 months ago

You have

My vote. Not an easy thing to write a patrarchan sonnet. If this is your first, I double the appreciation.
Thanks for sharing.

5 years 7 months ago

Thanks Rula its my third I

Thanks Rula its my third I tend to write Shakespearean but I love classic forms of any type

5 years 7 months ago

That's what...

they all say! [Smiles]. I can't find fault. Nice work! ~ Geezer.
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5 years 7 months ago

lol thanks Geezer..

lol thanks Geezer.. brainwashing to the fore!