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Conception
Warm, sultry summer nights,
Mosquitoes, like miniature biplanes of the damned, waiting to siphon your dreams,
A buzzing, invisible orchestra of thirst.
Are you ready for this heatwave to end,
This shimmering, hallucinogenic mirage of heat?
Is it worth your soul, this fevered, melting season?
Or is it a nuisance to behold, a sticky, surreal dream?
For there comes Winter, a porcelain ghost,
Zero zero winds whispering secrets in a language of ice,
Shoveling three feet of snow, a Sisyphean task in a white void.
Is it any better, snuggling under warm blankets,
Cocooned in comfort, a world away from the frostbite moon?
A time for conception, perhaps, in the silent, frozen heart of time?
However, you’re more in a hurry, a frantic, kaleidoscopic dance,
To shed your clothes in Summer, like peeling back layers of reality,
A time for conception, driven by sun-drenched madness.
Making love isn’t always for the young, a forgotten melody,
But a phantom echo in the winter's hush.
How nice to show you still care, a flickering, bioluminescent spark,
In each other’s arms, a temporary haven from the swirling cosmos.
Not a time for conception, necessarily,
But a time for resurrection, a phoenix rising from the ashes of the mundane,
A rekindling of the flame, a whispered secret in the vacuum of space.
A time to feel alive, vibrant, and whole,
A shared breath in the face of the infinite, indifferent universe.
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - draft
Comments
Geezer
4 months 2 weeks ago
Hmmmm...
The musings of a lost soul; wondering if they have made the grade. The best line? "A shared breath in the face of the infinite, indifferent universe. Yes, when we wonder what our part is in this place, we often see ourselves as stars of an infinite, indifferent universe. Made me feel small. ~ Geez.
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mark
4 months 2 weeks ago
Lost indeed
Thanks for a good interpretation.
Mark
Candlewitch
4 months ago
Hello Mark,
Your poem is constructed with striking language usage...I found myself marveling at your descriptions painted with a broad scope of landscaping! You blew me away with your wisdom. I would like to tell you of the lines I liked best. But the truth be told, I loved it all...every word drew me in and carried me along to the ending which made me fall in love with words again! Thank you for that!
fondly, Cat xxx
mark
4 months ago
Pleased you enjoyed
You are welcomed Cat,
Mark