Connoisseurs kissers

KISSING PARADE PRACTICE FOR VALENTINE TODAY

1. Some by kissing
others by missing
but a kiss is
just a kiss

2. Her open lips
thirst like mine
but I never beg

3. You seem to be
as hard up on kissing like me
I wish even the wind does kiss
but when I am out
the wind is breathless
it lazes
damned still
as if 'twas Gods will
no one should me
kiss
something I really miss
at least the sun does kiss

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

Comments

alidzain

9 years 5 months ago

loved

whydo you numbered them? Are you trying out something new?

Alid

lovedly

9 years 5 months ago

yes

different snaps were shown to me
for instant poetry
so numbered them

get your valentine
at least this year
she will love em
ok them
ok you man
alidz
all d bhhessttt

alidzain

9 years 5 months ago

loved

I don't celebrate valentine's day. Love is supposed to be celebrated everyday! On the other hand, my current situation doesn't give me much time to pursue romance.

Alid

lovedly

9 years 5 months ago

then when

u have a choice
rather as per you
add
No
sad though!

alidzain

9 years 5 months ago

Not sad, loved

Some of my dreams are coming true and I'm happy though a little tired due to hardwork that follows. Never thought I'll be able to represent my country in my malay poetry writing but I did it! I prove to the people who look down on me that I'm no pushover and yes I'm verrry happy with more request for my participation, using my works as part of humanitarian efforts!
It's a big wow to me..:D

Alid