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constants of change

Many, many decades later,

Subtrahend— —the thief of

time—had stolen years,

whittling away youth

with quiet precision,

leaving only memories as souvenirs.

Minuend, proud and steadfast,

stood firm against life’s relent-

less subtractions, holding onto

laughter,

unyielding, even as the seasons

adjusted the equation.

Difference, a wanderer,

measured space between

our footprints, sometimes vast,

sometimes mere inches—

—always shifting but never lost.

Constant, our faithful friend,

never faltered through life’s

algorithms, proof that distance

and time could never truly

divide what was meant to remain.

And so, decades later,

when our paths converged once more,

the solution was simple, undeniable:

Friendship is a theorem unbroken—

—forever true.

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: West Moreton, AUS

Favorite Poets: There is nothing quite as boring as a life completely devoid of shadows.

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Comments

Lavender

Lavender

1 month ago

Hello, CB!

A great blend of theory and pure ... what? Fate? Destiny? I'll be back when my mind is fresh. Meanwhile, "Difference, a wanderer..." Well said.
Thank you!
L

Lavender

Lavender

1 month ago

It speaks to me

of a true friendship, meeting again, after the test of time. Much may be gone and replaced or forgotten, but the friendship has always held a strong foundation. Even through constant change.
Thank you!
L

Rula

Rula

1 month ago

C.Bard

An interesting playful title.
And the last line should work out true, if only...
Unfortunately not every friendship is that constant, or at least what I got from those closing lines.
Still I like the bit of mysterious philosophy that wraps this piece.
Thank you for sharing as always!