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Apr 16, 2013
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We interact and find a track that leads to sheer digression,
grounds for misunderstandings that lead to sad aggression.
why do we do these things, when we know not all is clear,
we explode with our controversies, and hide behind our fear.
When all along it isn't really what at first was meant,
a sudden thrown out snide remark can make us soon relent,
we jump with our reactions far too fast,
and break up our good friendships made to last.
Take time to then consider what to do,
it's not too late to make amends,
with empathy between the two,
negotiate the creeks and bends, remaining friends.
About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Seren
12 years 3 months ago
Dear Ann
There is so much truth in this poem, I cant find fault
brava
love JC x
loved
12 years 3 months ago
beautifully put across how so true
we jump with our reactions far too fast,
Nordic cloud
12 years 3 months ago
Thank you both, it was felt,
Thank you both, it was felt, we all experience
this sometimes, don't we, none of us is perfect.
Love Ann.
Ian.T
12 years 3 months ago
Ann
A lovely piece of wisdom here and one I shall remember, You take care and know we think of you,
Yours Ian.T and Friends
Nordic cloud
12 years 3 months ago
Prompted by a fracas of
Prompted by a fracas of course,
we are often wise-guys,when it isn't us who are involved!!
Thank you Ian. Love Ann.