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the cost of Freedom
FREEDOM
what price freedom?
I know it well.
It is a window in a cell...
with walls to keep obsession out.
Yes, freedom is a lonely place -
and trust (?) It seems I quit that race -
won by those who once had hope,
won by those who compromised
their freedom for a deal.
Walking hand-in-hand with those they chose-
both captive creatures to their vows-
for better or worse - for life or death?
but, I shall never make that deal, for I remain imprisoned here,
surrounded by my walls of fear -
confined by eccentricity,
I am a soul- so deeply 'scarred' -
(a synonym for FREE)-
that love, sweet love -my last pursuit-
Can never, ever be.
About This Poem
Last Few Words: poetry is the voice of my heart... screaming at me. Many times... I am lost in the emotion and cannot see clearly...
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
Sparrow
8 years 11 months ago
Sarah
Firstly a great welcome to Neopoet..
Your cry has been heard and the healing draws strength from the universe.
Just a thought to hold onto if this is factual.
Loved the simplicity of he write, as if you know that somehow you have become a prisoner.
Always remember it's us that makes us a prisoner.
Look forward to your next piece,
Yours Ian..
sarahatthesea
8 years 11 months ago
love thyself...
LOL... a poet who loves themselves? I thought we were all about unrequited love and angst! Thank you for the kind and constructive words...
Sarah
jane210660
8 years 11 months ago
Hi and welcome.
Hi and welcome.
Loved the simplicity of this write, yet conveying so much anguish. Very moving. Jx
sarahatthesea
8 years 11 months ago
Thank you, Jx
Thank you, Jx
sarahatthesea
8 years 11 months ago
especially when we fall in
especially when we fall in love... it is when the walls become apparent... Thanks for the welcome... and the words.
sarahatthesea
8 years 11 months ago
that is exactly what I was
that is exactly what I was trying to convey in this poem... Thank you for taking time to read my work.
Geezer
8 years 11 months ago
Welcome to Neo...
and never say Never! It took me three times to find what I was looking for and now I have been married to her for twenty-six years in Sept. Yes, I have compromised and so has she, but just take it as having worked for what I have. I hope you enjoy Neo as much as I do and flourish here. ~ Geezer.
sarahatthesea
8 years 11 months ago
I am prone to angst... I have
I am prone to angst... I have had so many opportunities... a once beautiful woman, who has been used and found to be unworthy of anything but the beds of the men I loved...