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Candlewitch
Candlewitch
Jun 27, 2012 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Count On Me

Count on Me

love's passionate summations
compounding interest appreciation
accounts balancing inflation
affections performed enumeration
together we are amalgamated
happily diversified!

About This Poem

Last Few Words: another poem from the Mirror/rorriM manuscript.

Style/Type: Free verse

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Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Northwestern Wisconsin USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Edgar Allan Poe, William Blake, Bob Dylan, Tom Petty, Carlos Castaneda, Jim Morrison, the whole of Neopoet and many more.

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Rula

Rula

13 years ago

Then the market of Love shall flourish

dear Cat..Wonderful little piece.
sometimes less is more but you've really wet my appetite for more
Seems an easy equation isn't it? But few hearts are aware of
You have this cleverly done indeed

Candlewitch

Candlewitch

13 years ago

LOL!

Thank you sweet Rula! From my choice of words, you might think a banker wrote them, lol.

always, Cat

Roscoe Lane

Roscoe Lane

13 years ago

The same,

The same feelings only different ways of showing, but very much a union. beautifully put poem. Love roscoe..

judyanne

judyanne

13 years ago

lol cat

a perfect valentines card for an accountant lover :)

clever use and rhyme of multisyllable words

- you know, if you're feeling better you could still try one of the exercises in the workshop
- it is still open

hugs
judy
xxx

Candlewitch

Candlewitch

13 years ago

Dear Judy,

Thank you for reading and commenting. Glad you liked it! I'm feeling better but I still don't have much energy available. Thanks for the invite, though.

love, Cat

loved

loved

13 years ago

hiddensecrets will soon come out in the openbut when??that's .QS

1.
My dreams are running rampant

but dreams must so flow
in commotion..
intermixed with no relation
utter confusion..
then only another
FREUD will be born
to give a meaningful interpretation

a long one and hollow
no more will FOLLOW
all guys and gals now a days play
with toys...
and physical love,
they prefer to swallow...

2.we all get locked

some within
some without
and
the lover who promises,
but falls out
its a doubt
whether he too can
safely freely live without

3.child abuse doesn't normally produce ,
lest the child is over fourteen...

Child abuse doesn't normally produce, lest the child is over fourteen ...

but it does in abundance
rains shame
on both the abuser and abused
the abuser wipes off his ....
but the one who is abused
simply ask of him /her
their life becomes
eternally obtuse.

4.A lovely small financial equation
of love with fixed deposit
kind of interest...
more you save
more you will gain

but in actual love
you ought to remain
in order to
attain,
a manifold gain....

Candlewitch

Candlewitch

13 years ago

Dear Lonnie,

with this poem, I tried something different with hopes to amuse. Thank you for reading.
:)
always, Cat