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Jul 22, 2015
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But of course..July Contest
But of course
I am still in school of thoughts
when to pull up my socks
when will she look at me
when will I do what
perhaps a kiss
but the fatso there
alone at me does stare
how to avoid the black horn one
I am scared
so I leave the school from the back door
all are unaware
till I see another guy
kiss the one
for whom I my whole life would lay bare
But alas he too damn does care
Who is she to me
oh my Delaware!
of that rascal be aware
I wanted a virgin in you my
Sweety for you I did care!
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Barbara Writes
9 years 11 months ago
Loved
School days hopes dreams about heart crush, nice
lovedly
9 years 11 months ago
thanks barbara
after a long tyme u traverse
scribbler
9 years 11 months ago
Hi loved
One of the things which was special about the start of a new school year was seeing how much change class mates had gone through during the summer. .................stan
lovedly
9 years 11 months ago
ok
don't expect to win
do i
Barbara Writes
9 years 11 months ago
I'm here loved
Not as often as I wish but often as I can. Lol
Barbara Writes
9 years 11 months ago
You posted twice?
I like romance in this piece
Sparrow
9 years 11 months ago
Loved
a great write for July, wonder if this can win ???
Yours Ian..
lovedly
9 years 11 months ago
no ...no at all----- all know that
I am a born loser
so i just compose
what my mind does dispose
and Stan in me
NO CONFIDENCE DOES
repose