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Nov 26, 2010
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The Cracked Urn
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waxing rhapsodic
gilded actor of the quill
writing beautiful lies
just for the thrill
About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Psyve
14 years 7 months ago
Almost Haiku-like in its
Almost Haiku-like in its simplicity, I enjoyed this one for the meaning it conveyed in 4 lines:
An elegant write.
A poet on a poet, to my reading!
Psyve
Kailashana2
14 years 7 months ago
Thank you....reminds me of
Thank you....reminds me of one of the most simple (and therefore complex) and elegant lines of all time...
"There's a crack in everything,
that's how the light gets in." ~ Leonard Cohen