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Creation

All the countless stars
Flashed into their existence
Born of our climax

About This Poem

Style/Type: Structured: Eastern

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - draft

About the Author

Region, Country: U.S.A., USA

Favorite Poets: Emily Dickinson, Robert Frost, Walt Whitman. I’m enamored by the work of lyricists such as Robert Hunter, John Barlow, John Dyer Baizley, and Tom Marshall just to name a handful.

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Comments

Jackweb

Jackweb

2 years 5 months ago

Capitalization!!!

Capitalization is another way haiku is different from traditional poetry. This poetry form does not require the writer to capitalize. While you can capitalize, it is not required.

Very impressive! Well done!
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Seren

Seren

2 years 5 months ago

Sigh Tim!!! Wow!!!!

This is magnificent. You're an amazing poet and I feel honoured I get to read your work. I'm so glad I came back!!!

I've missed this immensely.

Kind regards Jayne x