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Jan 17, 2023
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Creation
All the countless stars
Flashed into their existence
Born of our climax
About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Eastern
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - draft
Comments
Rosewood Apothecary
2 years 5 months ago
Haiku
It’s 5/7/5.
Jackweb
2 years 5 months ago
Capitalization!!!
Capitalization is another way haiku is different from traditional poetry. This poetry form does not require the writer to capitalize. While you can capitalize, it is not required.
Very impressive! Well done!
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Words.unwritten
2 years 5 months ago
Beautiful words as always tim
Beautiful words as always tim x
Rosewood Apothecary
2 years 5 months ago
Aww
Thank you as always.
Geezer
2 years 5 months ago
Just one comment...
Damn! ~ Geez.
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Candlewitch
2 years 5 months ago
hey Tim,
good work!
*hugs, Cat
Seren
2 years 5 months ago
Sigh Tim!!! Wow!!!!
This is magnificent. You're an amazing poet and I feel honoured I get to read your work. I'm so glad I came back!!!
I've missed this immensely.
Kind regards Jayne x
Rosewood Apothecary
2 years 5 months ago
You flatter me
Which will get you very far. Smiles.
Thank you for reading
Thank you for your kindness
Tim