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Jul 29, 2024
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Crying After You
you meant everything to me
and I meant nothing to you
now here I am,
crying after you
while you smile back
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
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neopoet
11 months 2 weeks ago
Neopoet AI 5-29-23 version
The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:
The contrast between the depth of emotion felt by the speaker and the apparent indifference of the other person is effectively conveyed in your poem. The brevity of the lines enhances the impact of the emotions expressed. Consider exploring more vivid imagery or specific details to further engage the reader and create a more immersive experience. Additionally, you may want to experiment with different poetic devices such as metaphors or similes to enrich the emotional depth of the poem.
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