CYNOSURE OF YOUR EYES A POEM OF 2014 READ BY1350

I was 18
really wildly romantic
became poem
for many a poet
very cute when young
composed romantically
world loves it mostly

also keep changing avatars
logos and your signatures
gals will fly in
like butterflies
guys will silently admire

I'm since aged
yet my mind is very fresh

love to compose
love poems

as we dance prance and romance
every day in beautiful France

good lovely poetic
romantic friends
stay tuned in
I'm now passing
towards eternity
are you coming

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Just one life to live--- So Love it

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

Comments

Geezer

3 years 9 months ago

It helps to...

have a young mind and being fresh in your approach to love, but changing your presentation of personal attributes, and avatars, will make sure that you only confuse those that want to love you. I wonder if that is the point? ~ Geez.
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lovedly

3 years 9 months ago

Gee

No one would like to love me
the way you think Gee
lol
NO confusion
tis just a poem
now olden....

Geezer

3 years 9 months ago

Not all...

love-relationships have to be sexual or physical. Many of my love relationships are purely platonic. But even a platonic one can be trying, if you constantly change the platform that is the person you are.
~ Geez.
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lovedly

3 years 9 months ago

that is the person you are.

Gee you know me
what sort of a person you think
as of me