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Jul 19, 2013
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D E L E R I U M P R O M O T I V E
a bitter sluice archs
dark green and full
of gold
a shimmer cascade
falling forever
against the cool
shadow
of a quick dusk
the feel of the winds touch
caressing a dry hungry persistance
stitched with sparks
drench
but never quench
a seam of love
a coveted hate
a favoured scar
that vivid
sings
when passion
full of life
consumes
the restless
animal
desire
dancing in the
shade
in shapes
with want
and fear
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
lonlyhrtsclub13
12 years ago
love/hate
relationship....giving into passion and desires, despite how one feels about the other....great visuals and use of language..flowed beautifully....
Esker
12 years ago
mulled
the flat vortex with its blemish
the exchange
and histories
hate and love
its strong
an emotive drive
fresh and old
stringent and alive
gripping
and aching
I cannot walk away
not yet
lonlyhrtsclub13
12 years ago
indeed
love and hate
go hand in hand
so close
almost inseperable
hard to walk away
when the hate is
blinded by love
the aching
the yearning
for touch
ida
12 years ago
rabbit hole
shredded skin
offers a comfort from
the fall of grace
deserved
revered reserved
held tightly to the breast
gasps
with the weight of wishes
to frail to bear the weight
our tree grows tall and deep
drinking from our frailty's
I have dropped the ball today
haunting pasts resurrection
on the wrong day