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Mar 14, 2023
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Dads Love
Yeah my dad loved me
gave away all he had
to other greedy siblings...
left me a life long memory
he comes to me daily
six decades since
kisses me
About This Poem
Last Few Words: A life long dads memory
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Lavender
2 years 3 months ago
Dad's Love
Hello, Lovedly,
I get a mixture of feelings here, but a sweet reflection, too.
Lav
lovedly
2 years 3 months ago
Thanks
After posting this small poem my dad came in my dream
He said ''Don't worry...WAIT AND SEE...ENJOY LIFE... ONE DAY IT WILL RAIN GOLD FOR THEE..See my picture this ...But you can't download it ..Be brave as always''
Grand message he is still out there somewhere..... Lav waiting for me .
But I am in no hurry my family is right here with me
Lavender
2 years 3 months ago
Hello, Lovedly,
What a wonderful dream! I'm happy for you, Lovedly.
Lav
lovedly
2 years 3 months ago
thanks
again
indebted to you I remain
lovedly
2 years 3 months ago
Thanks
A fact cannot be declined KINDNESS
EA
Clentin
2 years 3 months ago
Good poem. I sense that your
Good poem. I sense that your siblings seemed to got more response from your father, he seems to be always with you even after his oassing
lovedly
2 years 3 months ago
Thank you
so true he died when I was around