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Jan 29, 2017
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Daffy Duck
Daffy Duck
has worst of luck
unlike his friend Bugs Bunny;
has fear of work
will always shirk
except in search for money.
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
weirdelf
8 years 5 months ago
"How To Read Donald Duck"
American imperialism at work
https://fadingtheaesthetic.files.wordpress.com/2012/03/33788991-how-to-…
K William
8 years 4 months ago
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Keith Logan
8 years 4 months ago
No,
it is simply meant to be a bit of fun.
weirdelf
8 years 4 months ago
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"lacked accomplishment"
that is hardly constructive criticism, K. William
I have yet to read your work. When I do I hope to offer more useful feedback.
Keith Logan
8 years 4 months ago
It's my fault
K Williams was systematically attacking a body of my work because I had the audacity to say something unfavourable about one of his poems.