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the dance of death

I have been watching

as the tendrils of life

drift off and away

casting shadows

on her soul

 

in a waning light

I felt the touch of faith

nails indented my knees

and palms, now laying down

I feel my heart shift

into a peaceful stillness

 

slowly it started

sliding in a sepia light

I now held her hand

tracing the infinity symbol

into her palm

 

now we silently wait

as death dances in the shadows

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: Please use care (this is a sensitive subject for me, do not critique harshly)

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Beyond the Black Stump..Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: Pablo Neruda, P.K.Page, W.H.Auden, to many and various to include them all ...

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Comments

Rula

Rula

12 years 1 month ago

Dear Jayne

This is touching though I don't figure every image yet I feel sadness through out. Is everything alright at your end. Is this about someone sick or dying and special for you?

Seren

Seren

12 years ago

Dear Rula

First off sorry for the delay in answering, We did have two deaths in our family and its part of the reason I havent been around much, I am still working on this one thanks for the read and your thoughts

sincerely Jayne- Chloe

Shyanne18

Shyanne18

12 years 1 month ago

LOVE IT

I think you may have written a new favorite of mine! Keep writing!

Seren

Seren

12 years ago

Smile

thank you so much I am very happy you enjoyed it, sorry for the delay answering your message

sincerely Jayne-Chloe