Dancing Balls

A very diplomatic poet
decided to wait
let his girl fan
show her gait
ere he upon her charms
does begin to vibrate

this composition
of a poem
in silence
let her wait
golf balls
in his pocket

keep her in waiting
why be blunt
better remain silent
lovely cool decision

why be erratic
let time roll by
like a golf ball
off one's pocket
on to the greener carpet

cell now switched off...

About This Poem

Last Few Words: A guy gets a call Hi babe He couldn't make out who was she

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
How does this theme appeal to you?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

Comments

c lynn brooks

5 years 5 months ago

lovedly

intriguing ot least was mildly amused at your wording the ttle is what drew me in

lovedly

5 years 5 months ago

thanks a mighty

for being amused
lynn

c lynn brooks

5 years 4 months ago

love

I have always maintained the title is the most important part of a poem as it captures he readers attention and the the first line holds their attention to want to read on would you not agree?

lovedly

5 years 4 months ago

glad you liked it

many days no one read it
so I changed the TITLE
Yes title attracts